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Fanfic Fanfare!

Unread postPosted: Sun Jul 13, 2003 12:12 am
by Lion's Mane
This thread is for people to post their fanfic works. The reason I do this is because they are creating a lot of clutter at the moment, and I'm looking to keep things nice and tidy! ^.^

Anyway, use this thread to post your fanfic works, and to comment on them. Thanks for your cooperation! Also, please note that I will be closing all the other ones after this is posted, so please, don't panic, since each one will have the link to this post. You're not in trouble! This is just to keep clutter down.

Unread postPosted: Sun Jul 13, 2003 8:25 am
by Davey Vengeance
I thought I would entertain you guys with my writing, I love writing stories and I think many people who read like them too. I want to start my Fanfic which is based on the Star Wars Trilogy, it is set after Return of the Jedi, the last of the movies in the series (though one of the original 3). It follows the travels of a Pilot in the Federal Alliance (Formerly the Rebel Alliance). He is part of a Jedi Blood line but does not realise his powers and is later taught by Luke Skywalker to use them to their fullest.

The Dark Seal of the Panther threatens peace in the Galaxy and once again save the Galaxy.

Star Wars Episode 7: Tyranny of The Dark Panther

The Rebel Alliance sucessfully quelled the Evil Empired final push and destroyed the Evil Lord Palpatine. Years after a new galaxy system has been established called the Federal Alliance System. It controls the Galaxy with a fair hand. The Jedi Race is again growing after the destruction of Lord Darth Vader.

A rival Group the following of the Black Panther Seal opposed the Federal Alliance as a evil democracy ruling with an invisible hand. Lead by the Sith Lord Jano Nixt, they threaten the peace of the Galaxy. Princess Leia sends a squadron to explore the unknown areas of the new system, to discover the origin of the Dark Seal.

Once again the Galaxy is in Peril and the peace of a new system is threatened by a Dark Force......


CHAPTER 1: NAISA HUMA : PILOT OF THE FEDERATION

In the distant star system a squadron of x-wing fighters were exploring the space near the planet of Elchera as there have been reports of hostility from enemy fighter ships.

NAISA: NEON LEADER, I have completed my scan of the area, there are no enemy ships on scope.

HARSCO: NEON 5, I hear you prepare to pull out of the system, we have done all we can.

RETT: NEON LEADER? Was it a hoax reading?

HARSCO: Aye, NEON 3

After a disapointing watch in the nearby system, the pilots of the Neon squadron returned to the Battle Cruiser to await further orders.

RETT: Hey Naisa, how have you been?

NAISA: Rett Larcox, I thought I recognised the voice, I have been doing well.

RETT: Why did you leave home so soon? Your Parents are worried.

NAISA: I had a dream, I want to become the greatest star pilot in the galaxy.

RETT: I am afraid General Solo holds that position.

NAISA:.......yeah you are right.

The two walked to the control room to recieve their debriefing.

HARSCO: Rett, Naisa good job on your first assignment, pity we could not see what you learnt at the academy.

NAISA: I would rather avoid unessesary combat sir!

HARSCO: Good!

RETT: Did we gain anything from our assignment.

HARSCO:............we were fooled it was a diversion by the Dark Pantero, they attacked a Federal Stronghold and have destroyed one of our shipments.

A man entered the room wearing a generals uniform.

SOLO: They are beginning to be a bother for us!

HARSCO: *salutes* General Solo, glad you could join us!

SOLO: At ease soldier, you too kid!

HARSCO: We need to neutralise this threat sir, we are taking damage from their attacks.

SOLO:........hmm.

NAISA: My I suggest something?

HARSCO: Silence!

SOLO: No let him speak, what is it kid!

NAISA: Do the enemy attack in a pattern.

HARSCO: Dantoine, Hoth, another Dantoine.......

SOLO: Yeah! of course, somebody followed the battles 10 years ago.

NAISA: Where will they next?

SOLO: It will be cloud city or Endor, build up the defenses on these bases.

The order was put forward by Harsco and the two young pilots were ready for action.

Please can I have feeback or any suggestions?

No problem my friend

Unread postPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2003 7:56 pm
by earthquake
I was afraid of this, but it was inevitable: I have a writer's block . I have know idea what to write. So I decided to ask you to give me some ideas.

Wether it be the sequel I semi-promised or something new, try to make the idea general, so that it won't be boring when you read it.

Unread postPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2003 8:07 pm
by Phoenix
earthquake wrote:I was afraid of this, but it was inevitable: I have a writer's block . I have know idea what to write. So I decided to ask you to give me some ideas.


This might be an absurd thought, but could you make one where the "DW Gang" goes to school? I'd just love to see how Lu Bu would react to his english teacher. :lol:

Unread postPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2003 10:08 pm
by English_Druid
Hey Dave, the fanfic seems a little short.. Maybe you should have made it longer. But the story seems good and looks like its going somewhere. Id always hoped that there would be a Episode 7 and this seems like a good continuation of 6..

Unread postPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2003 10:48 am
by ACG
This can be a good idea of making all the fics here. But, mine has chapters so people might mess up with which one is which.

Unread postPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2003 1:55 pm
by Davey Vengeance
Chapter 2: The Black Seal (STAR WARS FIC)


The Pilots at the Federation were ready to move, but meanwhile at the Space head Quaters the Black Seal Union was in progress

Count Giratoo: I insist that we stick to our agenda and rebuild the economy!

Lord Jano: Hmmm but what can we do with an uncontrollable economic power...we need to lay down the iron hand and make sure no body stands in our way!

Giratoo: My Lord, I understand your concern but we will soon have our robot army opperational and will not need foot soldiers anymore.

Jano: Hmm a good idea, I will consult the council of the matter.

*The group broke off for a break*

Foja Frewe: My Lord Master Jano, what do you wish of me?

Jano: ................Take your fleet we are going to attack The base on Tatoine again.

Foja: Sir?!

Jano: You heard me, it is premature but still we need to weaken their main supply lines!

Foja: Yes Sir!

Jano: Just a matter of time Princess til I control the galaxy!



He laughs and continues to walk down the corridors to discuss strategies with the council

Unread postPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2003 4:06 am
by ACG
Is it me or this thread is a little boring.?

<Mod Edit (Justin) > Please no spamming in the thread, just post your fan fics or reaction to a currently posted fan fic. </Mod>

Unread postPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2003 6:54 pm
by Wizardman
Nice fic.

Unread postPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2003 12:53 am
by PangDeGuy
This one's from Sim Rtk:
Battle of Hu Lao Gate Dw3

Yuan Shao: Sun Jian, go straight ahead, Ca-
Sun Jian: Oh, why straight ahead? That leads right to Lu Bu! I don't want my hair ruined! *Smooths out hair in a "cool" fashion*
Yuan Shao: Look, you're supposed to be the van an-
Sun Jian: What's a van?
Yuan Shao: The front, now lo-
Sun Jian: But I'm scaaaared!!! Waaah!!!!! *Runs away crying*
Yuan Shao: *sigh* Cao Cao, go to the top of the Fan Shui Gate. Yu-
Cao Cao: But Yuany, I'm giving out money to the poor right now! You cannot interfere with good deeds!
Yuan Shao: Yes, bu-
Cao Cao: Uh uh young man! No buts! Priorities first!
Yuan Shao: Yes mam. *Sucks thumb*
Cao Cao: That's better!
Yuan Shao: *shakes head* Er, Yuan Shu, you attack from the rear...
Yuan Shu: WHAT?! WHY DO I GET THE FILTHY REAR?! I MEAN, THAT'S DISGUSTING!!
Yuan Shao: Sissy...
Yuan Shu: Oh yeah?! Bring it punk! *Trips over a twig and cries*
Yuan Shao: THAT'S IT! I GIVE UP!!!! *walks away angrily*
Director: Cut Cut! Come back Yuany! I promise it won't be so bad!
Yuan Shao: First of all, STOP CALLING ME YUANY YOU BUNCHA (beep)
(the rest of the parts are censored for crude violence and excessive word use)