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Unread postby bigdaddyyum1 » Thu Apr 21, 2005 1:28 pm

here are two of mine for you

Smoke
Breathing in the fire,
Inhaling thick murky tar.
Gasping in liquid death,
Diluting pure essence.

Breathing out the smoke,
Exhaling dense steam.
Fumes that pollute,
Vapours that kill.

Death in disguise.
Pain in pleasure.
Addiction's a disease.
Slow suicide.

Sniper
Patiently, I lie waiting for you.
To the ultimate perfection
I know your every move
I know everyone you talk to
every number that you call.

I wait and watch for you to arrive
the expectancy makes me feel alive
my nerve ends tingle in anticipation
as I imagine your sweet annihilation
clocks chime sensing your doom.

The rifle I raise at the stroke of five
for very soon you will arrive
I look for you through the site
I must breathe my chest feels tight
excitement turning my mouth dry.

I see you and take careful aim
I am ready to extinguish the flame
a single crack startles birds to air
for their intrusion I don't care
as I watch you face disappear.

In a sudden void there is no sound,
then your body tumbles to the ground
then noise invades the peaceful dream
as the passers-by start to scream
and cower away in absolute fear.

But Hark! What is this?
I know I didn't miss!
For grey and red stain your dress
One large congealing mess
of what was your fine brain.

It seems that I don't feel pleasure
no real memories for me to treasure
too clinical and far too cold
more cowardly than feeling bold
not seeing into your soul.

Cannot quench this burning rage
still trapped inside this cage
what will be next I wonder
into earth she will be buried under
but still alive, there is no doubt.
God pours life into death and death into life without a drop being spilled.
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Unread postby Kristina » Thu Apr 21, 2005 1:40 pm

:shock: dude--they very good--i love them.sooo much better than mine.
i could feel myself anticipating the kill in sniper, and smoke needs no words to describe it except your own. they were so awsome
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Unread postby bigdaddyyum1 » Thu Apr 21, 2005 1:44 pm

hmm are they really that good? if you say so and btw ur poems are good to
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Unread postby Kristina » Fri Apr 22, 2005 1:05 pm

i dunno--mebbe we're just two psychos?
ah well, psychotic peeps rule!
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Unread postby bigdaddyyum1 » Fri Apr 22, 2005 2:21 pm

yes very true but here are a few more

slow death
Inhale, exhale
Forward, back
Living, dying:
Arrows, let flown each to
each
Meet midway and slice
The void in aimless flight
--
Thus I return to the
source

truth
The truth embodied in the
Buddhas
Of the future, present,
past;
The teaching we received
from the
Fathers of our faith
Can be found at the tip of
my stick.


itscoming
Coming, all is clear, no
doubt about it. Going, all is
clear, without a doubt.
What, then, is all?

Death

Pain, agony, torture
A bed of squirming germs
Parasitic creatures
Multiplying worms

Wailing, crying, pleading
"Darling, get better soon!"
Commanding, explaining, sighing,
The swimming noise typhoon

Sleep, tortured sleep
Machine of beeping life
Breathing through hollow tube
The one that called me wife

Closed eyes, calm moon
Here comes stranger now
With no false concern
Unlike husband whom I bow

Soft hand, murdered hand
Reaching out to me
"Come, come, I take thee away,
To paradise we flee."
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Unread postby Coxix » Sat Apr 23, 2005 1:33 am

very creepy but wow extremely imaginative sort of.....
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Unread postby Kristina » Sun Apr 24, 2005 8:30 pm

love them-i told you we were psychos, yay!
i'm suffering from extreme writers block...................................
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Unread postby bigdaddyyum1 » Mon Apr 25, 2005 12:33 am

here are 2

Immortal Beings
Take this life and swallow it down
Add another jagged edge to your side
Take this pain and choke it down
But don’t let it kill you…

Twist the knife in my back
Open my wounds and make them bleed
Crimson blood flows from these veins
Pour this poison from my veins
Into a chalice
Take my soul and drink it down
This I beg of thee
My immortal beings
Do what I ask of thee
And you shall live forever


Euphoria: Gone

What is there for anyone?
If you can’t write a lullaby
What would you do?
If the ink spilled only nightmares
How many times can you cower in the shadows?
Away from the devastation of dreams
Why must I look up at the stars?
Those are always too far to reach
I’m sick of crawling for a lifeline
I said success, and stuttered
Being hopeless seethed through
(20 YEARS AND NO FEELING FOR MORE!)

Dreams: the path of the bewildered
(NEVER AGAIN!)
Shooting out of range
And now I die standing
Serving
Let’s start again
(RESTART!)
Don’t let me die again

Is this what I’m meant for?
To remain numb as the heart bleeds empty
My face carries too many scars
The sinister wounds of falling forward
I’ve declared war on the thoughts of the mind
The foolishness of despair
And I begin to sleep more as the dreams fade
A senseless casualty of the internal battlefield
Coat the promises with deceit
At least it would look familiar
I’ve bled so many times
But this time ink battles with tears

Is there a vacation from fear?
Is there any other feeling that can consume me?
(20 YEARS AND NO FEELING FOR MORE!)
I’m nothing I wanted to be
Deteriorated soul, deluded mind
Euphoria gone
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Unread postby Kristina » Mon Apr 25, 2005 1:29 pm

MY NEW FAVE IS THE LAST ONE--(sry bout the caps) euphoria gone-it rocked so hard-- im still blocked--i hate it!!!!
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Unread postby bigdaddyyum1 » Mon Apr 25, 2005 2:27 pm

dam i have having block too but here is 1

dark creatures

Dark creatures of the night,
I welcome thee.
Come pierce my neck
And turn your pearly whites,
Blood red.
Taste the pure innocent life
That flows through my veins.
I invite you,
I yearn for your touch,
Your open arms
Warm my soul
And keep me warm at night.
So won’t you come and
Take me away.

Welcome,
My dark creatures of the night,
My Immortals,
Come on in.
My door is open for thee.
Don’t have to knock,
Just walk right on in…
I invite thee into my house,
Into my life,
My body and
My soul.
Take it all away
And set me free.

Drink the blood
From my veins
Until I’m near death,
Then let me drink from you.
I’ll give you strength
And you’ll give me…
Immortality.

My heart screams
And my soul bleeds
Awaiting this casualty.
Pour me a glass of
Cold sorrowful life
Taken from an innocent
Young bloke.
Ripped from his sorry,
Pathetic young
Parade he called
Life.
His lifeless body
Still lays on the dirty,
Disease ridden ground
Down in the dark, damp,
Cold deserted alley
Behind the pub.

The street lights flicker,
The night comes to an end.
As you close the lid to our coffin,
I look at you and say,
“It is the end.
I have come to terms with my life.
It is over…
And so now I must say…
Goodbye.”
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